Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 11 November 2020
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hello Luois
ReplyDeleteI really liked your facts about the water cycle and how rain is made.
My favourite part was how the sun makes the water float up to the sky. maybe next time you could say how the water turns into a cloud.
have a good afternoon 🙂🧐Louis from Tristan
Hi Tristan,
DeleteThanks for the feed back, and I dont know how ot turns into a cloud I think it's made of a chemical or something.
Louis.