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Wednesday 25 November 2020
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Louis,
ReplyDeleteI am blown away, the detail you have added into your creative story about being shrunk in the classroom is great. You had me having a giggle to myself reading it. I loved how you have experimented with punctuation such as speech marks and the adverbs you have used after e.g yelled loudly. I am relieved that I did not sweep you all away with the broom, phew!
Your next step is to see if you can group your ideas into paragraphs.
Keep it up,
Miss Esselink
kia ora miss esselink,
DeleteThank you for your feedback. Next time I will definitely paragraph.
nga mihi.