Aroha is something every human shall have,
Some people do not no what it means so I have been making a poster to explain it.
So here it is,
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Aroha is something every human shall have,
Some people do not no what it means so I have been making a poster to explain it.
So here it is,
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Louis, I love your post. I really like the way the red hearts stand out from the black background. It is important that everyone feels Aroha isn't it.
ReplyDeleteMaybe you could think about making the text a lighter colour so it is a bit easier to read against the background.
Kia Ora Miss Judkins, thank you for your feedback, to me I can see tha]e writing quite clearly so I might not need to change the font colour.
DeleteKia Ora Louis, well done on publishing your work to your blog. I think your poster is clear and really well designed. Don't forget to explain the learning task at the beginning of your blog.
ReplyDeleteHi miss Hart, I thank you for the feedback.
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